Question

假定你是某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)的小記者, 以下漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容是你的所見(jiàn)所聞,諳根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。
內(nèi)容要求：
1.描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；    2.發(fā)表個(gè)人感想

注意：
1. 短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫
3. 詞數(shù)120左右;
4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。
參考詞匯:告示牌sign

Answer 1

不唯一
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

試題分析：這是一篇以漫畫(huà)形式的作文，注意漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。