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7．某英文報(bào)正在就建立良好的師生關(guān)系進(jìn)行討論．你作為一名中學(xué)生，參與了討論．請(qǐng)你圍繞"A good relationship benefits us all"這個(gè)話題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文．
文章必須包括下列要點(diǎn)：1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；
2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的；
3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系．
注意：開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
A good relationship benefits us allAs a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．【高分句型二】（建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性）
Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely．（你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的）To build a relationship of this kind，teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．【高分句型三】（如何才能建立這種關(guān)系）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．就‘作為一名中學(xué)生，怎樣和老師建立良好的師生關(guān)系'談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?nbsp;
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主． 
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的 3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系． 
重要短語(yǔ)：build a good relationship with （建立良好的關(guān)系），show love and concern for sb（對(duì)某人關(guān)愛(ài)和關(guān)心…），seek support and advice（尋求支撐和幫助），benefit sb（對(duì)某人有益），in one's opinion （某人認(rèn)為），be filled with （充滿），exchange ideas freely（交換想法），joint efforts （合力），enjoy a friendly relationship（享受健康的關(guān)系）． 
【高分句型一】
1．①I(mǎi)t is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers ②who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners． 
①此處是由"it"引導(dǎo)的形式主語(yǔ)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"． 
②此處是關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"the teachers"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)． 
【高分句型二】
2．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot． 
①此處為"介詞+關(guān)系代詞which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"We students can always seek support and advice from them"，"which"指代前面主句中的"support and advice"． 
【高分句型三】
3．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students． 
此處是由"Only【狀語(yǔ)成分：從句/時(shí)間副詞/介詞短語(yǔ)】+一般疑問(wèn)句形式"構(gòu)成的部分倒裝．

解答 A good relationship benefits us all
       As a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listeners．【高分句型一】We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we can benefit and learn a lot．【高分句型二】（建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性） 
      Therefore an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding，and respect，so we can exchange ideas freely．（你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是怎樣的）To build a relationship of this kind，teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and express our feeling frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a friendly relationship between teachers and students．【高分句型三】（如何才能建立這種關(guān)系）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．