Question

2007年9月10 日《21世紀(jì)報(bào)》 刊登了中國(guó)適齡兒童上學(xué)的調(diào)查結(jié)果（見下圖）。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表及提示,為你校校刊的 “English Corner” 寫一篇報(bào)道。 內(nèi)容包括：

圖中所反映的情況。

發(fā)生這些變化的原因。

1）1986年中國(guó)決定到2000年在全國(guó)普及九年義務(wù)教育。

2）學(xué)校增多，尤其是在鄉(xiāng)村。

3.  你期望到2010年會(huì)是怎樣的情況。

    注意： 1.開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

           2.詞數(shù)100 左右。參考詞匯：九年義務(wù)教育：nine years of compulsory education

     

    The 21st Century, a newspaper, published a report on Sept. 10th on school-age children attending school in China.______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

The 21st Century, a newspaper, published a report on Sept. 10th on school-age children attending school in China.

As is shown in the bar graph, the number of school age children attending school increased a lot between 1985 and 2002. In 1985, the percentage was just over 95.5%, but it rose in the five years that followed to about 98.5% in 1995. After that, the number continued to increase and by 2002, 99% of children were attending school.

These changes happened not only because, in 1986, the government introduced a law stating that by the year 2000 every Chinese child would have nine years of compulsory education, but also because more schools were built especially in the countryside.

Therefore, I dare to say, from this tendency that the percentage of school age children attending school will climb to 100% by 2010.

解析:

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