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5．當(dāng)前大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，很難找到合適的工作，請簡要分析這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并提出你的建議．你的作文應(yīng)包括：
●中學(xué)生普遍缺乏職業(yè)規(guī)劃教育 （career planning education）；
●大學(xué)的專業(yè)設(shè)置與社會(huì)需求存在脫節(jié)現(xiàn)象 （disconnect）；
●你的建議．Tape Scripts and Answers．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，很難找到合適的工作的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：當(dāng)前大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，很難找到合適的工作，分析這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并提出建議．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，很難找到合適的工作．第二部分為這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因．第三部分為作者的建議．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
as follows 如下
the professional learning 專業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)
social demand社會(huì)需求
become more and more fierce變得越來越激烈
accumulate relevant work experience積累相關(guān)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)
only when they start looking for a job did they realize that they lack the necessary vocational training此句用了only+狀語從句，部分倒裝
it is strongly recommended that college students do some part-time jobs in their spare time to accumulate relevant work experience．此句運(yùn)用了it is recommended that虛擬語氣，should 可省略．

解答 There is an increasing number of graduates from universities who find it's more difficult to find a good job．（當(dāng)前大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，很難找到合適的工作）
Nowadays，more and more college students complain that it is hard to find a good job．Caused reasons for this phenomenon are as follows．First college students spend  most of the time in the professional learning at school，only when they start looking for a jobdid  they realize that they lack the necessary vocational training．Second，there is a disconnect between the professional setting in University and social demand．（分析這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因）
The competition among college students is becoming more and more fierce，which leads to the less chance of any college student to find a job．Therefore，it is strongly recommended that college students do some part-time jobs in their spare time to accumulate relevant work experience．（建議）

點(diǎn)評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．