Task-based Writing―Argumentation

閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

The generation gap between students and their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3. 3 per cent out of a survey group of 1 000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts.

In today’s educational environment teachers are considered to be the authority figure for learning instead of also becoming a good friend in the lives of students.

As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial(偏心).

“I feel sad to hear such remarks” said Yu Yi a well-known special-class teacher.

She recalled that in the past teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break. But today study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers.

“Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted (傳授) but also where students are taught how to be an upright(正直的) person” Yu said. “The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state.”

Yang Xiong，director of the Juvenile ['dʒu:vinail] Research Institute（青少年研究所）， said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially [səb'stænʃ(ə)li]（實質(zhì)上）responsible.  (216 words)

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個詞概括學(xué)生不愿告訴老師內(nèi)心想法的原因；

2. 然后以約120個詞就“現(xiàn)代師生關(guān)系”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：

(1)你是否愿意告訴老師你內(nèi)心的想法？為什么？

(2)你希望你與你的老師之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的？如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？

[寫作要求]

(1)可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2)標(biāo)題自定；

(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確、語言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適、篇章連貫。

Title: _______________________________________________________

Para.1 Summary ( 30 words or so) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5分）Para.2 Write one transitional sentence. ( Are you willing to share your inner thoughts with your teachers ? Why? )

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.3 What relationship is between teachers and you? How to build this kind of relationship?

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Para.4 Sum up. (20 words or so) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Possible version: ( 177 words)

Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship

According to the passage we can know students are becoming unwilling to confess（坦白） to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.（ 36 words）

As far as I’m concerned, I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. For one thing, they show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. For another, I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot. （53 words）

In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly.

                                         （71 words）

To sum up, only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between teachers and students.  （17 words）