Question

【題目】【天津市2015年中考英語試題】書面表達（本大題共15分）

假如你即將在學校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點提示如下：

（1）幾個月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞。

（2）從那時起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞。

（3）現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。

（4）有些鄰居有意見，認為音樂很吵，無法入睡。

（5）你認為人們可以跳廣場舞，但……

參考詞匯：跳廣場舞 do square dancing （對某人）有意見 have a complaint (against sb.)

要求：

（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。

（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’s more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹在學校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言的發(fā)言稿。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： she is...，some neighbors have a complaint against ...，They think that...以及But they should ...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用連詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意完整地表達提綱中所列內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了發(fā)言稿的主題，要介紹自己的祖母，接下來介紹祖母現(xiàn)在和過去的比較，以及鄰居們對廣場舞的態(tài)度，最后闡述自己對人們跳廣場舞的觀點。此處be in love with, have a complaint against, a good way to do sth, keep healthy等這些詞組的運用以及 狀語從句so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.的運用也讓文章增色不少。