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4．2014年起，連云港市政府為解決本市居民出行的"最后一公里"問(wèn)
題，逐步投入公共自行車，這是便民、環(huán)保的一個(gè)有力舉措．截至2015年4月，城市主干道、BRT站、小區(qū)等多處已全方位配套此設(shè)施．作為中學(xué)生，你要推廣公共自行車的好處，讓更多的人知道政府此舉的重要性，呼吁人們少開(kāi)車，多騎行，保護(hù)環(huán)境．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．騎公共自行車出行方便，可以隨時(shí)租還．
2．緩解交通擁擠，不僅省時(shí)間，還省錢．
3．可以健身，減肥．
4．欣賞沿途風(fēng)光，心情好．
5．你的呼吁…（至少2句）
要求：1．短文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文要連貫．
2.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Now，public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang．I think it's a good thing．
It isconvenientto ride a public bicycle．Itcan be rented at any time．Riding a public bicycle canease traffic congestion．It savesnot only time，but also money．Riding a public bicycle is good for our health，and weight loss．We canenjoy the scenery along the way，and we have good mood．I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible．We should drive cars as little as possible．If we do that，we should protect our environment．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 It is convenient for us to ride a public bicycle．騎公共自行車對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)是方便的．這是it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型，對(duì)于…來(lái)說(shuō)…是方便的． 
  高分句型二
 If we do that，our environment will be better．如果我們這樣做，我們的環(huán)境會(huì)更好． 這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Now，public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang．I think it's a good thing．
It is convenient for us to ride a public bicycle．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】It can be rented at any time【要點(diǎn)一，騎公共自行車出行方便，可以隨時(shí)租還】．Riding a public bicycle can ease traffic congestion．It saves not only time，but also money【要點(diǎn)二，緩解交通擁擠，不僅省時(shí)間，還省錢】．Riding a public bicycle is good for our health and weight loss．【要點(diǎn)三，可以健身，減肥】We can enjoy the scenery along the way，and we can have good mood．【要點(diǎn)四，欣賞沿途風(fēng)光，心情好】I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible．We should drive cars as little as possible．If we do that，our environment will be better．【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)五，呼吁】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．