Question

3．班級(jí)將舉辦英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，以"How to Be Happy"為題目，寫一篇90詞左右的演講稿．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
要求：
1．短文應(yīng)條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明．
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息．
3．短文應(yīng)包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Good morning，everybody!The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy"．The following are my suggestions．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"How to Be Happy"為題目說說怎樣保持快樂．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．有生活目標(biāo)---知道做什么
2．保持健康---養(yǎng)成好的生活習(xí)慣，鍛煉
3，幫助他人---通過幫助他人獲得快樂．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
keep healthy保持健康
try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事
be ready to do sth 樂意做某事
in trouble 處于困境
share with sb 與某人分享
【高分句型】
1．①When we have life aims，we can be clear about ②what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②疑問詞+to do作為about的賓語．
2．①When we help those ②in trouble，we can get much happiness．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②in trouble 處于困境，作為后置定語，修飾those．
3．I believe①②if we do so，we can have a happy life．
①believe后是賓語從句．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Good morning，everybody!The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy"．The following are my suggestions．
First of all，we should have life aims．When we have life aims，we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life．【高分句型】（有生活目標(biāo)---知道做什么）
       Next，we must keep healthy．Without good health，we will have nothing．So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day．（保持健康---養(yǎng)成好的生活習(xí)慣，鍛煉）
       Finally，we ought to be ready to help others．When we help those in trouble，we can get much happiness．【高分句型】（幫助他人---通過幫助他人獲得快樂）
       I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life．【高分句型】
      That's what I want to share with you．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．是要求談?wù)勗鯓颖３挚鞓罚瑫r(shí)態(tài)比較單一，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣