Question

3．以My pen pal（我的筆友）為題寫一篇60個(gè)字左右的小短文
      姓名 Lisa 年齡 13
籍貫 美國(guó) 紐約 （New York）
學(xué)校 No.3Middle School
外貌 金黃色長(zhǎng)卷發(fā)，中等身材，有點(diǎn)胖
愛好 喜歡穿藍(lán)色衣服，喜歡讀書，下棋，游泳
性格 友好 和善

My pen pal
I have a pen pal．She is Lisa．She comes from the USA．She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York．She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair．But she is a little fat．She wants to be thin．She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue．She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time．He is friendly and kind She is good at her subjects．She likes helping her classmate．Both her classmates and teachers like her very much．She has many frineds．Do you want to be her pen pal？．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time．她喜歡與她的朋友在她的空閑時(shí)間里看書，下棋和游泳．句子中l(wèi)ike doing sth喜歡做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞的ing，in her free time在她空閑時(shí)間．
②Do you want to be her pen pal？你想成為她的筆友嗎，句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．

解答 My pen pal
    I have a pen pal（引出話題）．She is Lisa．She is13．She comes from the USA．She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York．She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair．But she is a little fat．She wants to be thin．She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue．（她的基本信息） She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time（高分句型）．（她的愛好）She is friendly and kind．She is good at her subjects．She likes helping her classmate．Both her classmates and teachers like her very much．（她的性格特點(diǎn)）She has many frineds．Do you want to be her pen pal？（高分句型）（結(jié)束語）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱提作文，介紹自己的筆友的，學(xué)生比較有話說，但是要注意提示要點(diǎn)一定寫全．同時(shí)還要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．