Question

明天（星期五）全班同學(xué)將去參觀科學(xué)博物館(the Science Museum)，由你（班長）通知全體同學(xué)。（通知的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）內(nèi)容如下：
1.早上8點鐘在校門口集合，步行前往。 2．下星期一交一份有關(guān)參觀的報告。 3．參觀時要認真聽，仔細看并記下有趣的東西。4．不可在博物館內(nèi)大聲喧嘩及拍照。 5．帶筆和筆記本。詞數(shù)80左右。
參考詞匯：上交hand in， 認真聽listen carefully， 記下write down，
喧嘩make noise， 拍照take pictures， 帶上take…with you
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow.________________________
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Thank you

Answer 1

One possible version：
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at 8 o’clock at the school gate and we will walk there. Don’t forget to take your pen and notebook with you because you have to use them to write down something interesting while visiting. So you had better listen as carefully as you can. A report about the trip must be handed in next Monday. Finally, it’s not allowed to make noise or take photos. Wish a nice trip.
Thank you.

試題分析：本篇書面表達應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容準確地傳達信息，運用情態(tài)動詞和特定的句型表達注意點。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準確運用一般將來時。文章銜接連貫，運用了so, because，finally等連詞進行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:had better do, It’s not allowed to do等。