Question

17．10月24日，星期日，你和同學(xué)們一起去郊游．進(jìn)行的活動有劃船、爬山、在山坡上野炊等．你們拍了很多照片．這一天你們玩得很高興．請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的日記．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①When we felt tired and hungry，we decided to have a picnic on the hillsides．當(dāng)我們感到又累又餓的時候，我們決定在山坡上野餐．句子中when引導(dǎo)的是一個時間狀語從句，decide to do sth表示決定做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．
②I want to get more chances to go out．我想得到更多出去的機(jī)會．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式，后面的to引導(dǎo)的短語作定語修飾changes．

解答 Sunday October 24th（時間和日期）Today I went to the park for a picnic together with my classmates．（引出話題）
We all got up early in the morning and went there by bike．We sang happily while we were riding．（如何去郊游）
In the park，first we went boating on the lake and then we climbed the hill （山）．When we felt tired and hungry，we decided to have a picnic on the hillsides（山坡）．（高分句型）The park was very beautiful．
A lot of flowers were coming out．We also took many photos．（郊游所進(jìn)行的活動）
We all enjoyed ourselves．I want to get more chances to go out（高分句型）．（我的感受及期望）

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