Question

書面表達（15分）

今天你在網上看到了一張貼子。請根據帖子的內容給予回復。（字數：80左右）

Post: Who can help me? Posted by a worried mother on 12 / 05/ 09 Can you help me? My son, Tony is a 14-year-old boy. He used to be a good student in his class. But recently he changes. He doesn’t put his heart in his lessons, he is often sleepy in class and sometimes he can’t hand in his homework on time. His teacher called me and asked why. Several days ago, I followed him secretly when he walked out of the school. He went into a net bar directly. At home he still plays on the computer very late. And he is very angry with me when I talk about his behavior with him. What should I do? How can I draw him back into his lessons? A worried mother

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Madam,

I'm sorry to know that you have so much trouble with your son, and I don't think he should always play computer games. But don't worry. You can ask his teacher for help or you can invite some of his friends to have a word with him. You'd better encourage him to find out that spending too much time on computer games is bad for his health and studies. Try to encourage him to do other things instead of playing computer games. What's more, as his mother, you should learn something about computer games so that you and your son may have something to talk about. Besides, you may find some topics that your son is interested in, and then he may talk with you. Don't lose heart. It will be all right.

a friend

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用英語給材料作文。要求介紹根據一個母親對兒子的擔心恢復一封信，給出合理的建議。寫作時要根據母親的描述，進行建議。首先表示自己對這件事的看法，然后再給出建議。

【亮點說明】這篇短文首先表示自己對這件事的看法，然后層層遞進的給出了建議。短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。給建議的句式變化多樣，如：You can ask ..Don't lose heart …You'd better …等。適當的連詞的應用也給文章增色，如：What's more, Besides,等。

考點：話題作文。