Question

11．你班以"告別陋習，走向文明"為主題進行了一次綜合實踐活動．同學們收獲很大，尤其是鄭爽同學．請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文敘述鄭爽在活動前后的表現(xiàn)．請你對今后的班級活動提出一些建議．詞數(shù)在100詞左右．文章開頭已給出，不記總詞數(shù)．

in the past	at the moment
come to school late	come to school early
quarrel with others	be friendly to others
make noise	listen to the teacher carefully
throw rubbish about	collect the rubbish

I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress．In the past，he often came to school late．He often quarrelled with his classmates．He made much noise in class and he also threw rubbish everywhere．Sometimes he played computer games too much and his parents and teachers all worried about him．They often talked with him patiently．
But he has changed a lot recently．At the moment，he comes to school on time．He is friendly with his classmates and gets on well with them．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect rubbish with other students．He can finish his homework carefully on time．All the teachers and his classmates think highly of him．
I hope our class will organize more activities．Our classmates will take an active part in them．We will certainly be more helpful，more friendly，more skillful and have many other good qualities．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是敘述鄭爽在"告別陋習，走向文明"活動前后的表現(xiàn)．請你對今后的班級活動提出一些建議．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．過去；上學遲到，和別人吵架，制造噪音，亂扔垃圾
2．現(xiàn)在；早點上學，對他人友好，仔細聽課，收集垃圾
3．我的建議
常用到的重點短語：
make progress 取得進步
quarrel with sb 與某人吵架
make noise 制造噪音
get on with sb 與某人相處
take part in 參加

【高分句型】
1．I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress．
I am glad 我很開心，that賓語從句正好對此作出陳述或說明．
2．Sometimes he played computer games too much①and his parents and teachers②all worried about him．
①and連接的兩個并列句．
②worry about  擔心
3．I hope our class will organize more activities．
hope后省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．

解答 I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress【高分句型】In the past，he often came to school late．He often quarrelled with his classmates．He made much noise in class and he also threw rubbish everywhere．Sometimes he played computer games too much and his parents and teachers all worried about him．【高分句型】They often talked with him patiently．（鄭爽的過去）
   But he has changed a lot recently．At the moment，he comes to school on time．He is friendly with his classmates and gets on well with them．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect rubbish with other students．He can finish his homework carefully on time．All the teachers and his classmates think highly of him．（鄭爽的現(xiàn)在）
   I hope our class will organize more activities．【高分句型】Our classmates will take an active part in them．We will certainly be more helpful，more friendly，more skillful and have many other good qualities．（我的建議）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．以表格的形式給出了作文的主要內(nèi)容，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容．由于材料涉及過去和現(xiàn)在的內(nèi)容，故注意過去時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的應(yīng)用．
該題型主要考查學生的語言表達能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息，不遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮．做到表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫