Question

5．最近你們班就"低碳"生活方式進行了討論，你認為的"低碳"生活方式是什么．請你用英語一篇文章，說說你的"低碳"生活．

注意：1．根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名；
3．詞數(shù)80左右 （開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
My Low Carbon Life
We can do a lot in our daily life to live alow carbon life．In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible andspend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．Saving water also matters much．Besides，I often sort the rubbish，hoping that we might recycle some，which will surely benefit us a great deal．In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．More importantly，when I go out，walking，riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice，which contributes to a cleaner world．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．
句中涉及的短語有："turn off 關(guān)閉"、"spend+時間+（in） doing sth  在…上花費多少時間"．這句話意為：在日常生活中，如果可能的話我總是關(guān)燈，并且少看點兒電視，少上點兒網(wǎng)．
高分句型二：
In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．
句中短語有"in addition 另外"、"instead of 代替，而不是"、"in order to do sth 為了做某事"、"prevent sb from doing sth 阻止…做…"、"cut down 砍倒"．這句話意為：另外，為了避免更多的樹被砍，我通常用手帕代替紙巾．

解答 My Low Carbon Life
We can do a lot in our daily life to live alow carbon life．（開篇點題）
In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．【高分句型一】Saving water also matters much．Besides，I often sort the rubbish，hoping that we might recycle some，which will surely benefit us a great deal．In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．【高分句型二】More importantly，when I go out，walking，riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice，which contributes to a cleaner world．（我的低碳生活）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．