Question

書面表達。
課余時間是我們忙碌學習生活的調節(jié)劑。你是如何支配自己的閑暇時間呢？看電視、做運動、聽音樂、閱讀書報、效游、幫父母做家務？還是……
請你以“My Free Time”為題，描述一個自己的課余生活。
注意：1、要求條理清楚，字跡工整；80個詞左右。
2、開頭已寫好，請你接著往下寫。
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my spare time.                                                
                                                                  
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                              
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                              

Answer 1

My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time!

試題分析；這是一篇命題作文，介紹自己的課余生活。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，句子結構主要為系表結構，主謂賓結構，注意運用所給短語。敘述順序基本按照時間順序敘述即可，注意上下文的邏輯關系。文中適當使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調重復，避免單詞及語法錯誤。
點評：此類作文考查的是學生基礎的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎句型的應用。平時學習中應注意對于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對于一些比較經典的段落，有目的的進行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。