Question

9．假如你是李華，你的朋友玲玲寫信向你抱怨（complain）沒有時間做作業(yè)，沒有時間鍛煉…..，她就這些問題向你尋求幫助，請你以如何合理安排時間給她寫一封回信．
提示：學(xué)習(xí)方面：做好學(xué)習(xí)計劃，上課認真聽講，高效完成作業(yè)．
鍛煉方面：利用早上和周末鍛煉．
其他建議：①，②，…．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（2）文章應(yīng)該包括寫信的背景和提示中的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和學(xué)校．
Dear Lingling，
I am glad to hear from you．
I am glad to talk about my advice on how to plan time well．
You complained that you have no time to do your homework．I think you should plan your day carefully and spend your time in a proper way．You can make a plan about your study，listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework whenever you have time．
You also said you don't have enough time for exercise．You can do it in the morning and on weekends．I also think you should cut down the time playing out with your friends．Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing．
I hope you think my advice is of some help to you．
Hope things work out．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You complained that you have no time to do your homework你抱怨沒有時間做作業(yè)．
that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing不要花太多時間玩電腦游戲聽音樂，雖然真的很放松．
though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，

解答 Dear Lingling，
   I am glad to hear from you．
   I am glad to talk about my advice on how to plan time well．
You complained that you have no time to do your homework【高分句型一】．I think you should plan your day carefully and spend your time in a proper way．You can make a plan about your study，listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework whenever you have time．（學(xué)習(xí)方面）
You also said you don't have enough time for exercise．You can do it in the morning and on weekends．（鍛煉方面）I also think you should cut down the time playing out with your friends．Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing．（其他建議）【高分句型二】
   I hope you think my advice is of some help to you．
   Hope things work out．
 
                                                                Yours，
 
                                                             Li Hua

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