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4．請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀上圖，對(duì)90后學(xué)生普遍具備的優(yōu)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述（至少3點(diǎn)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（例如：We are usually fair．We always treat others equally．）．另外，作為一名90后學(xué)生，請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，列舉至少2點(diǎn)不足之處進(jìn)行描述．最后，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你自己的感悟，對(duì)即將開始初中生活的新生提出你的建議．
具體要求：
1?內(nèi)容包括至少3個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)、2個(gè)不足之處和1個(gè)建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2?括號(hào)內(nèi)所給例句不得使用．
3?不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4?語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整．
5?文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名．
As post?90s students，we have so many advantages．
We are usually kind and helpful．When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．We are also energetic．We like to do sports and gotraveling．Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class．In addition，we are obviously imaginative，We always try something new and do everything differently．On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages．To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite．Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct way．We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．Overall，as past-90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life，as quickly as you can．You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities．Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．
so…that從句：如此…以至于…
【高分句型二】
Overall，as past-90s students ①who will enter a middle school，I think②you need to③get used to school life，④as quickly as you can．
①who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的 past-90s students．
②think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
③get used to 習(xí)慣于
④as…as sb can盡可能的…

解答 As post?90s students，we have so many advantages．We are usually kind and helpful．When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．We are also energetic．We like to do sports and go traveling．Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class．In addition，we are obviously imaginative，We always try something new and do everything differently．（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages．To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite．Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct way．We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．【高分句型一】（不足之處）Overall，as past-90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life，as quickly as you can．【高分句型二】You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities．Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create．（建議）

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