Question

你校與英國(guó)某中學(xué)結(jié)成姊妹學(xué)校，英方�？�編輯（Ann）來(lái)信了解你校的課外活動(dòng)情況及你們的建議，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
生詞：興趣小組 interest group  活動(dòng) activity
活動(dòng)時(shí)間：4：50 – 5：50
主要內(nèi)容：（1）體育類：籃球、足球；
（2）興趣小組活動(dòng)： 繪畫(huà) 歌舞 電腦等；
（3）英語(yǔ)角 （周三下午）。
建議：（1）增加課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間;
（2）減少作業(yè)量。
Dear Ann,
I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:50—5:50 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some students are interested in sports. They play basketball and football. We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing. And now, We computer games are the most popular. On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner. We like speaking English there. We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.) 

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。