Question

20．假設(shè)你是Jim，請(qǐng)你給旅行社的老板（Mr．Smith）寫(xiě)一封信．信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．希望能夠去中國(guó)南部進(jìn)行十天的旅行．
2．想要住在海邊，并且有一套足夠大，能夠容納5個(gè)人居住的公寓，最好能帶有廚房，能夠自己做飯來(lái)節(jié)約錢(qián)．
3．希望能提供一些活動(dòng)，比如游泳，沙灘排球等．
4．最好能夠坐火車去．
要求：1．必須包含以上所有內(nèi)容．2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不得少于80 詞．
Dear Mr．Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：
I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．
As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!
Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．

Yours，
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．我們想有一套足夠大，能夠容納5個(gè)人居住的公寓，句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)；which is big enough for five people作定語(yǔ)修飾 apartment，構(gòu)成一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句．
②Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．最后，如果我能乘火車到達(dá)那里，我會(huì)很高興．句子中if引導(dǎo)一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，by train表示乘火車．

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：（引出話題）
 I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．（高分句型）Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．（住的環(huán)境）
 As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!（希望做的活動(dòng)）
 Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy（高分句型）．（希望出行的方式）
 Thank you very much!I hope you can reply to me as soon as possible!（祝愿）
                                                 Yours，
                                                    Jim

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