Question

你在美國(guó)的筆友Sam 二月份要來(lái)北京游玩，他向你了解北京有哪些地方可參觀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求用e-mail向他作介紹。

詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)，盡量用上以下提示詞

提示：capital, tourist attraction, the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace, spend summer time, Beihai Park, the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders, be proud of

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I’m very glad to hear that you will have a chance to come to Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s an old city with a long history. There are so many tourist attractions in Beijing. You can visit the Forbidden City which was the Imperial Palace in Qing dynasty. The Summer Palace is also a good place to visit. It’s the place that emperors and their family spent summer time there. It’s so beautiful that people often lose themselves in it. You can go round other places of interest as well, such as Beihai Park. But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. It’s worth visiting. We Chinese are very proud of it.

I can show you around Beijing when you come. I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)話題內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合話題可知本文時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面動(dòng)詞用原形。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用連接詞等。此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀題目，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】亮點(diǎn)一：But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. 但在其中，長(zhǎng)城是世界七大奇跡之一，也可能是最有名的一個(gè)。

亮點(diǎn)二：It’s worth visiting.。這是值得一游的。

亮點(diǎn)三：We Chinese are very proud of it. 我們中國(guó)人都為它而非常自豪。

亮點(diǎn)四：I can show you around Beijing when you come。你來(lái)的時(shí)候我可以帶你參觀北京。

亮點(diǎn)五：I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.我期待著盡快見(jiàn)到你。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。