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你們學校最近就“一個好朋友的標準”做了一次問卷調(diào)查，調(diào)查結果如下圖。

請你以“What a good friend should be like”為題，用英語為你們學校的校報寫一篇短文，報道此次調(diào)查結果并談談自己的看法。

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注意：1．詞數(shù)：80－100(開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù))；

2．內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

3．文章條理清楚、意思連貫、語句通順；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。

What a good friend should be like

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　參考范文一：

What a good friend should be like

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．About seven percent/only a few/Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．About forty－eight percent/Less than half/Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．Sixty－seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports．Ninety-five percent/Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest．Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．

　　參考范文二：

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．Nearly all(95％)of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest．He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you．Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing．Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports．Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard－working and do well in lessons．Of course, there are some(7％/less than 10％)caring about appearance．They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends．

　　I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome．I think honesty is the most important．…

　　[評分說明]

　　1．本題總分為15分，按5個檔次給分。

　　2．評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　3、詞數(shù)少于規(guī)定詞數(shù)20詞以上者，扣1分。

　　4、未寫自己觀點的，扣2分。

　　5、評分時應注意：內(nèi)容要點、運用詞匯和語法結構的準備性及上下文的連貫性、單詞拼寫的準確性。

　　各檔次的給分范圍和要求：

　　第五檔：(15－13分)

　　完全符合題目要求，表達清楚，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種語法結構和豐富的詞匯，語言通順，語意連貫，具有邏輯性。允許有個別語言錯誤。

　　第四檔：(12－10分)

　　符合題目要求，表達基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語法結構和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順，語意基本連貫。有少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(9－7分)

　　表達不夠清楚，內(nèi)容不夠完整，但尚能達意。語法結構和詞匯錯誤較多，語言不通順，影響整體理解。

　　第二檔：(6－4分)

　　與題目有關的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達出基本要點。只是簡單拼湊，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。

　　第一檔：(3－0分)

　　白卷或文不對題或不知所云。只能寫出與內(nèi)容有關的一些單詞。