Question

早餐對(duì)我們學(xué)生是很重要的。很多學(xué)生不吃早餐就上學(xué)，這對(duì)健康是有害的。 食物能夠提供我們能量。如果我們不吃早餐，我們就不能專心聽講；如果沒(méi)有足夠能量，我們就無(wú)法增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，保持活力。所以，吃了早餐再上學(xué)，這是很重要的。
請(qǐng)你以“Breakfast”為題，寫一篇70個(gè)詞左右的短文。
                
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                          
                                                                          

Answer 1

Breakfast
Breakfast is very important for us students. Many students go to school without breakfast. It is bad for our health. Food can give us energy. If we don’t have breakfast, we can’t listen to the teacher carefully; if we don’t have enough energy, we can’t build ourselves up and can’t make us active and strong. So remember to have breakfast before you go to school. It’s very important.

試題分析：本題是圍繞breakfast展開敘述，首先應(yīng)該說(shuō)明breakfast的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保持健康。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家要堅(jiān)持天天吃早餐。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本書面表達(dá)的中心是早餐的重要性，所以應(yīng)該圍繞題目的提示進(jìn)行書寫。應(yīng)該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性。盡量用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表述。