Question

假如你是愛華，請你依據(jù)下表，描述一下你的爸爸。

過去	現(xiàn)在
抽煙 很重 呆在家，上網(wǎng) 不干家務(wù)	戒煙 通過鍛煉等方式減肥 經(jīng)常旅游，聽音樂 幫媽媽干家務(wù)，輔導(dǎo)我功課
猜想一下爸爸和我們家庭未來的生活。

要求：字?jǐn)?shù)80—100，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A sample：

Hello. I’m Ai Hua. You know that it seems that my father has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me tell you about it.

Firstly, he used to like smoking. But now he gives it up. Besides he used to be fat, but he is losing his weight by exercising himself such as swimming and climbing. What’s more, he just liked staying at home and surfed the Internet. But now he is used to traveling and listening to music a lot. Finally, he didn’t do chores. And now he not only helps mum with housework, but also helps me with my homework.

I’m very proud of him. My mother and I are very happy that he has changed a lot. We’re sure that he must be very healthy and helpful. Our family must live a happier life in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求描述父親的過去和現(xiàn)在，并且猜想家庭的未來生活。所以本文主要以第三人稱書寫。使用的動詞時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。要適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章前后連貫，符合邏輯。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文使用了一些連接詞，為文章增色不少。如but，Not only…but also，Firstly，F(xiàn)inally等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。