Question

1．你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行"浪子回頭，走向文明，創(chuàng)建生態(tài)和諧校園"為主題的綜合實踐活動．通過活動，同學(xué)們收獲很大，尤其是Peter同學(xué)．請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇有關(guān)Peter的短文．（詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不記入總數(shù)．）

In the past	Now
came to school late	come to school early
made noise in class	…
argued with others	…
played computer games too much	…
…	…

I am glad that Peter has made great progress．             ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He not only listens to the teachers carefully in class，but also he is friendly to his classmates．
句中使用短語有："not only…but also…不僅…而且…"、"be friendly to sb 對…友好"．這句話意為：他不僅上課認(rèn)真聽課，對同學(xué)們也很友好．
高分句型二：
What's more，he helps collect the trash．
句中短語有："what's more 再者"、"help do sth 幫助做某事"．這句話意為：再者，他幫助收垃圾．

解答 I am glad that Peter has made great progress．（開篇點題）In the past，he often came to school late．He made noise in class．He used to argue with others．And even worse，he often played computer games．（過去的Peter）Now，he changes a lot．He comes to school on time．He not only listens to the teachers carefully in class，but also he is friendly to his classmates．【高分句型一】What's more，he helps collect the trash．【高分句型二】All the teachers and his classmates like him very much．And his parents are pleased with him，too．（現(xiàn)在的Peter）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．