Question

假設(shè)你叫Daniel，三年前隨父母來(lái)福州，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇題為“我眼中的福州”的文章，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1）福州是個(gè)美麗的地方，有許多名勝古跡，每年吸引許多游客；
2）福州最近幾年發(fā)展很快，道路兩旁高樓林立；
3）但是也存在一些問(wèn)題：房?jī)r(jià)太高，不少人買(mǎi)不起房子；水和空氣受到污染；
4）我希望…… （至少2點(diǎn)）
注   意：文章必須用一段話包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________

Answer 1

My name is Daniel. I came to Fuzhou with my parents three years ago. Fuzhou is a beautiful city with many places of interest. They attract many tourists every year. Fuzhou has developed fast in the past few years. There are many tall buildings on both sides of the roads. However, there are also some problems. The price of the new houses is too high. Some people can’t afford them. The water and the air are polluted. I hope we will take action to protect our environment. We should try our best to make Fuzhou a better city.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，描述自己眼中的福州。本題給出了詳盡的材料,但在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合所給材料可知，描寫(xiě)福州過(guò)去的情況時(shí)，應(yīng)該主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫(xiě)福州現(xiàn)在的情況時(shí)，應(yīng)該主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞或短語(yǔ)，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】如果文章中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)或句子，如came to、places of interest、try our best。句中的時(shí)態(tài)使用恰當(dāng)，還有簡(jiǎn)單的從句，都使文章增色不少。