Question

20．假設(shè)校報英語專欄開展主題征文活動，請你根據(jù)表格提示，用英語寫一篇短文，說明農(nóng)村和城市各自的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，投稿應(yīng)征．
要求：1．可根據(jù)表格提供的信息適當(dāng)拓展
2．語義通順，句子連貫，書寫工整．
3．詞數(shù)：60詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．

The life in the city and the countryside
city	countryside
more jobs，better schools，shopping is easier…	freher air，bluer sky，clearer rivers，much quieter…

Different people have different opinions about the life in the city and the countryside．
It depends on our needs．In the city，there are more jobs，better schools，and even beautiful theatres．Shopping is also easier．In the countryside，people can enjoy fresher air，bluer sky．They can see clearer rivers．And it's much quieter．What's more，the traffic is not so heavy as that in the city．So，in my opinion，it's hard to say which is better or worse．The city is better for studying and working．And the countryside is better for living．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It depends on our needs取決于我們的需要．
depend on 依靠，取決于
【高分句型二】
①What's more，the traffic is②not so heavy as that in the city另外，農(nóng)村的交通不像城市的交通那樣擁擠．
what's more另外，再者．
not so+原級+as…不如…

解答 Different people have different opinions about the life in the city and the countryside．It depends on our needs．【高分句型一】In the city，there are more jobs，better schools，and even beautiful theatres．Shopping is also easier．（城市的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）In the countryside，people can enjoy fresher air，bluer sky．They can see clearer rivers．And it's much quieter．What's more，the traffic is not so heavy as that in the city【高分句型二】．（鄉(xiāng)村的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）So，in my opinion，it's hard to say which is better or worse．The city is better for studying and working．And the countryside is better for living（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評 寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．