Question

兩個(gè)月前，膠東在線對(duì)我校初四學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃進(jìn)行了一次問卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表中提供的數(shù)據(jù)信息，寫一篇100-120詞的調(diào)查報(bào)告，并結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和畢業(yè)后的人生理想。
要求：1.行文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名； 2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Two months ago, Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Two months ago, Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.
65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school. About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation. And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families. Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims. I think they should make it clear what to do next.
In my opinion, we teenagers should have a design for our future life. Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time.
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients. So, I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University. I’m ready for a hard but colorful senior school life.

試題分析：
這是一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)對(duì)我校初四學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃調(diào)查表，寫一篇100-120詞的調(diào)查報(bào)告，并結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和畢業(yè)后的人生理想。本文應(yīng)該一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，寫作中注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用和多種句式交替運(yùn)用。還有敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。 第一段對(duì)調(diào)查報(bào)告的分析。用百分?jǐn)?shù)做主語，看其代表的名詞。這里代表students，所以謂語用復(fù)數(shù)形式。對(duì)同一個(gè)意思用了不同的表達(dá)方式。如hope to和would like to。還有make it clear what to do next形式賓語的用法。第二段發(fā)明自己的看法，In my opinion。Different students have different aims.不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)詞不定式作表語；so that如此…..以至于。get ready for準(zhǔn)備。等這些詞組和短語、句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。