Question

10．現(xiàn)在是晚上8點(diǎn)，根據(jù)Frank提供的信息，請描述一下Frank一家的活動(dòng)情況．（60詞左右）．

Father	read a book
Mother	watch TV
Grandmother	clean the room
Frank	do his homework
Mary	play computer games

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①And Mary is playing computer games after finishing her homework．瑪麗做完作業(yè)后正在玩電腦游戲．句子使用了現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，構(gòu)成am/is/are+Ving形式．
②What a peace and happy family．多么和睦幸福的家��！句子考查what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句．結(jié)構(gòu)：What+a/an+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)+主語+謂語!What+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)/不可數(shù)名詞+主語+謂語!

解答 It's 8 o'clock in the evening now．Every member of Frank's family is busy now．（引出話題）His father is reading a book in his room．And in the sitting-room，his mother is watching TV，while his grandmother is cleaning the room．As for Frank，he is doing his homework in his bedroom．And Mary is playing computer games after finishing her homework（高分句型）．（介紹家庭成員在做的事情）What a peace and happy family!（高分句型）（感受）

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