Question

現(xiàn)在上網(wǎng)成了許多學(xué)生的主要娛樂方式之一。假如你叫小亮，你上周對所在學(xué)校的60名同學(xué)(30名男生，30名女生)進(jìn)行了上網(wǎng)目的調(diào)查，下面是你的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一封信給校報(bào)主編，報(bào)告自己的調(diào)查結(jié)果。

1．報(bào)告應(yīng)包括圖表所示內(nèi)容；

2．?dāng)⑹稣{(diào)查結(jié)果時(shí)要避免重復(fù)使用百分比；

3. 其中要有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子；

4．報(bào)告中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名；

5．報(bào)告應(yīng)在80詞左右。生詞：chat(聊天、談話)。make a survey調(diào)查 purpose目的

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Xiao Liang

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

Last week,I made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our school about their purpose of getting on the Internet.Both the boys and the girls like chatting very much.

What the boys like most is playing games and the girls also like it.Both the boys and the girls like to read news or send e-mails through the Internet.Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends.For studying,boys and girls are equal in the number,but only several children will use Internet as a tool to study.So I think we should guide the students to use Internet better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表作文。圖表所示數(shù)據(jù)清晰，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls，about their purpose of getting on the Internet.Both the boys and the girls like chatting very much.What the boys like most is playing games， keep in touch with friends.are equal in the number,use Internet as a tool to study.等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。