Question

12．剪紙是中國傳統(tǒng)的技藝之一，請根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇短文，70～80 詞．
1 剪紙只需要用到剪刀和紙，受到人們的喜愛；
2 剪紙有各種形狀，如人物、動物、花和吉祥的漢字等；
3 人們經(jīng)常在節(jié)日貼剪紙，因?yàn)槿藗冋J(rèn)為它們能帶來幸福和好運(yùn)；
4  我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)好這項(xiàng)傳統(tǒng)技藝．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一  
 Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese Arts．剪紙是中國傳統(tǒng)的技藝之一．one of…．…之一，注意后跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)．
高分句型二
 We should try our best to protect this traditional skill．我們應(yīng)該盡力保護(hù)這一傳統(tǒng)技藝．句子中try one's best表示盡力做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語．

解答 Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese Arts．【高分句型一，注意one of 的使用】Paper cutting only need to use scissors and paper，so people enjoy doing it in their daily life【要點(diǎn)一，剪紙只需要用到剪刀和紙，受到人們的喜愛】．Paper cutting can be made in different shapes，such as figures，animals，flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings【要點(diǎn)二，剪紙有各種形狀，如人物、動物、花和吉祥的漢字等】．People often put them up on the windows，doors as well as walls on festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck．【要點(diǎn)三，人們經(jīng)常在節(jié)日貼剪紙，因?yàn)槿藗冋J(rèn)為它們能帶來幸福和好運(yùn)】
We should try our best to protect this traditional skill．【高分句型二，注意try的使用】【要點(diǎn)四，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)好這項(xiàng)傳統(tǒng)技藝】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．