Question

【題目】【2016山東菏澤】書面表達。

假如你是李強，有一天在上學(xué)路上，你看到趙王河公園河岸的道路損壞嚴重，一些彩磚不見去向，影響人們的出行。請用英語給China Daily菏澤頻道寫一封信，反映這一問題，并提出你的看法和建議。

（一）參考詞匯：destroy毀壞；color bricks彩磚；disppear消失；repair修復(fù)；take measures采取措施；protect保護；public facilities公共設(shè)施

（二）其他要求：100字左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

I'm a high school student___________________________________________________________________

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Li Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a high school student. One day, on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park, the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared, which would affect people’s going out. Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves. I’m very sorry about that.

Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that, I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities. And as for us students, whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities, we should make efforts to stop him or her in time. Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in.

Li Qiang

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求給China Daily寫一封信，反映看到的問題，并提出自己的看法和建議。這是一封書信，要注意書信的基本格式，注意書信的語言選擇。根據(jù)短文提示，本文就從兩個方面來寫作，一是自己在上學(xué)路上看到的情況，主要用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)進行表達；二是自己的建議和看法，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

寫作亮點：本范文層次清楚，條理分明。短文分為兩部分，第一部分是寫作者在上學(xué)路上看到了一些現(xiàn)象。本段敘述清楚，表達準(zhǔn)確。用了賓語從句，定語從句等等表達形式，使得本段生動具體。第二部分是作者的看法與建議。條理清楚，中心突出。本段使用了賓語從句，時間狀語從句；還準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧薬s soon as, take measures, as for, make efforts, in this way等等結(jié)構(gòu)，給本段增色不少。