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5．在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的當(dāng)今社會(huì)，作為一名中學(xué)生，承受著來自生活和學(xué)習(xí)等多方面的壓力．請(qǐng)你以 How to Reduce the Pressure為題，談一談你是怎樣減緩壓力的．
要求：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．
2．字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰．
3．文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
How to Reduce the Pressure
How to Reduce the Pressure
Nowadays，we are under too much pressure．It's not good for our development．
[高分句型一]（不定式短語(yǔ)作目的狀語(yǔ)） In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．I also hang out with my friends when I feel stressed．Listen to music is a good way for me to relax，especially light music and pop songs．[高分句型二]（it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式短語(yǔ)）It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．They can understand me better．
These ways of relaxing help me a lot．Now I am more confident and do better than before．（最后要總結(jié)一下，自己列舉的減緩壓力的方式方法是不是有幫助）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．為了減緩壓力，我經(jīng)常做一些運(yùn)動(dòng)，例如跑步，游泳，或者打籃球．In order to reduce the pressure是不定式短語(yǔ)作目的狀語(yǔ)，such as意思是"例如"，列舉的事物放在起后面．
高分句型二：
It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．和朋友或父母交流一下，這也是很有幫助的．to talk with my friends or my parents是不定式短語(yǔ)，是真正的主語(yǔ)，而用it作形式主語(yǔ)．

解答 How to Reduce the Pressure
     Nowadays，we are under too much pressure．It's not good for our development．
[高分句型一]（不定式短語(yǔ)作目的狀語(yǔ)） In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．I also hang out with my friends when I feel stressed．Listen to music is a good way for me to relax，especially light music and pop songs．[高分句型二]（it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式短語(yǔ)）It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．They can understand me better．
    These ways of relaxing help me a lot．Now I am more confident and do better than before．（最后要總結(jié)一下，自己列舉的減緩壓力的方式方法是不是有幫助）

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