Question

隨著揚州經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴重。去年冬天霧霾（the thick haze）天氣接二連三出現(xiàn)，生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗揚州應(yīng)該從何做起。請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇短文，向報社投稿。

揚州現(xiàn)狀	美麗揚州從我做起	未來展望
車輛越來越多 空氣越來越差 ……	出門做公交 …… ……	水更清，天更藍 …… …….

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名。

 

Answer 1

With the development of Yangzhou, more and more families have cars.However, the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse. Last winter, we experienced several days of the worst air pollution in history. And many people got sick because of the polluted air.

As the student of this ancient city, we should take actions to beautify our hometown. We can take buses to go out; we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible. What’s more, we can call on the whole society to plant more trees.

If each of us tries our best to protect our environment, I believe we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers. Yangzhou will be more suitable and comfortable to live in.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。