Question

4．時光飛逝，轉(zhuǎn)眼你已經(jīng)從一個不諳世事的頑童變成一名即將畢業(yè)的初中生了．在過去的幾年里，無論是在外貌、性格方面，還是生活、學(xué)習(xí)方面，你都有很大的變化．請以"How I've changed"為題，結(jié)合下表的信息寫一篇短文．
提示：1．可以參考A部分的個別句式展開描寫．
2．要包含表格內(nèi)所有的信息，可以適當(dāng)增加信息．
3．要條理清晰，書寫整潔，不少于60詞．

變化	外貌	short→tall
	性格	shy→outgoing
	生活	walk to school→take the bus to school
	學(xué)習(xí)	be silent in class→be brave to ask questions play every day after school→study all the time  hate tests→get good grades
愿望	get better grades，go to senior high school （或自擬一點內(nèi)容，說明自己的理想生活）
打算	自擬一至兩點內(nèi)容，說明將如何為實現(xiàn)自己的愿望而努力

How I've Changed
                                                                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others過去我太害羞了不敢在人前講話．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我學(xué)習(xí)很努力現(xiàn)在是我們班的第一名．
so…that如此…以至于．that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 How I've changed
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was short．I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】I walked to school．I wasn't interested in study and hated tests，so I was weak in all my subjects． Aand I was silent in classWhat's more，I played every day after school．（過去）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm tall．I am more outgoing and I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I take the bus to school．I like studying and  brave to ask questions in class． I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．（改變后）
  I hope to get better grades and go to senior high school．So I will study harder and learn more．（愿望和打算）

點評 在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容．這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)．