Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) (10分)

周一下午你們班舉行了“節(jié)約糧食、健康飲食”的主題班會，請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

內(nèi)容提示：

1. 浪費(fèi)糧食可恥。作為中學(xué)生，我們該如何做？（請?zhí)岢鲋辽僖粭l建議或做法。）

2. 健康飲食很重要。作為中學(xué)生，我們該如何做？（請?zhí)岢鲋辽僖粭l建議或做法。）

要求：

1. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

2. 80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞語： shame 羞恥

Good afternoon, everyone!

I’d like to say something about today’s topic for our class meeting.

That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

I’d like to say something about today’s topic for our class meeting.

First, it’s a shame to waste food. As students, we should get into the habit of saving food. For example, we should order as much food as we can eat in the dining hall and eat up all the food we have ordered.

Second, health is very important for us. It is good to have a balanced diet. In order to keep healthy, we’d better eat in our school dining hall or at home rather than in fast-food restaurants.

From now on , let’s save food and eat healthily!

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹兩方面的內(nèi)容，一，作為中學(xué)生我們?nèi)绾喂?jié)約糧食；二，作為中學(xué)生我們?nèi)绾伪３纸】档娘嬍场Ｖ饕�用到一般現(xiàn)在時。主語用第一人稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，有一些好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語如，it’s a shame to waste food.，As students，F(xiàn)or example, eat up all the food we have ordered. In order to keep healthy, we’d better等。這使文章更有富有邏輯性，更豐富。