Question

2．現(xiàn)在人們越來越意識到健康的重要性，如何擁有一個(gè)健康的生活方式呢？請根據(jù)提示以"How to keep a healthy lifestyle？"為題寫一篇80-100個(gè)單詞的英語短文．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
要求：至少寫出包含所給提示，意思連貫，語法正確的句子．短文內(nèi)容可以自由發(fā)揮．
提示：
1．健康的生活方式的重要性
2．有足夠的睡眠
3．吃得健康
4．堅(jiān)持鍛煉
How to Keep a Healthy Lifestyle？
We all know it's very important to keep a healthy lifestyle．
We all know it's very important to have a healthy lifestyle．Because if we have a good lifestyle，we will be full of energy．But how can we have a healthy lifestyle？Well，many students always study hard until 11：00 pm every night，and they can't get enough sleep．I think they should go to bed earlier in order to get enough sleep and work better next day．Some students always feel bored for everything．For these students，I think they can talk about their problems with their parents or teachers．Also，it's very important to have enough exercise and eat healthily for a good healthy lifestyle，because exercise can make happy and healthy，and eating more junk food is bad for our health．So eating healthily is also very important．After all，having a healthy lifestyle is the most important to all of us�。�

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 Because if we have a good lifestyle，we will be full of energy．因?yàn)槿绻�我們有一個(gè)好的生活方式，我們將充滿活力． 這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
高分句型二
I think they can talk about their problems with their parents or teachers．我認(rèn)為他們可以和他們的父母或教師談?wù)撟约旱膯栴}． 這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I  think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 How to keep a healthy lifestyle？
We all know it's very important to have a healthy lifestyle．Because if we have a good lifestyle，we will be full of energy【高分句型一，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】．But how can we have a healthy lifestyle？【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】Well，many students always study hard until 11：00 pm every night，and they can't get enough sleep．I think they should go to bed earlier in order to get enough sleep and work better next day．Some students always feel bored for everything．For these students，I think they can talk about their problems with their parents or teachers【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．Also，it's very important to have enough exercise and eat healthily for a good healthy lifestyle，because exercise can make happy and healthy，and eating more junk food is bad for our health．So eating healthily is also very important．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何擁有一個(gè)健康的生活方式】After all，having a healthy lifestyle is the most important to all of us！【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

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