Question

假如你是李明，喜歡集郵但是遭到了父母的反對。請給你的澳大利亞朋友Mike發(fā)一封
電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請求幫助。
要點(diǎn)提示：

	愛好	集郵
	困惑	父母反對
李明	觀點(diǎn)	個(gè)人愛好有助于學(xué)習(xí) ……(至少二點(diǎn))
父母	觀點(diǎn)	時(shí)間應(yīng)花在學(xué)習(xí)上

 
注 意：1)內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2)表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；書寫規(guī)范；
3)詞數(shù)：80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mike,
I have a problem with my parents recently. I don't know how to deal with it and would like
to have your help.
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Best wishes !
Li Ming

Answer 1

I like collecting stamps. I think my hobby is a great help to my study. I have got a lot of knowledge of history, nature and so on from it. I have also learned a lot of other things that I can’t learn from my books. But my parents don’t agree with me. They believe that collecting stamps is a waste of time. They ask me to spend more time on my lessons. What should I do? I hope you can give me some advice.

試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將父母及自己的觀點(diǎn)介紹清楚，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會有法可依。