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6．假如你在第一中學(xué)讀書(shū)．你校準(zhǔn)備在"五一"節(jié)邀請(qǐng)the Beatles樂(lè)隊(duì)到你學(xué)校舉行音樂(lè)晚會(huì)，歡度"五一"節(jié)．請(qǐng)你以學(xué)校的名義寫(xiě)一個(gè)英語(yǔ)海報(bào)，告知全校師生．內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1、時(shí)間：五月一日晚上八點(diǎn)開(kāi)始；
2、地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂(lè)廳；
3、對(duì)the Beatles樂(lè)隊(duì)略為介紹；
4、座位有限，請(qǐng)事先定位，聯(lián)系電話：7380540．
要求：根據(jù)中文提示，要求語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．中文提示要點(diǎn)不要逐條翻譯．字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
NOTICE
Dear classmates，The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the worlD．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．Our telephone is 7380540．The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇列提綱的一篇海報(bào)，要注意海報(bào)的格式．內(nèi)容是學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備在"五一"節(jié)邀請(qǐng)the Beatles樂(lè)隊(duì)舉行音樂(lè)晚會(huì)，歡度"五一"節(jié)．通知學(xué)生們時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，來(lái)參加音樂(lè)會(huì)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．

寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1、時(shí)間：五月一日晚上八點(diǎn)開(kāi)始；
2、地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂(lè)廳；
3、對(duì)the Beatles樂(lè)隊(duì)略為介紹；
4、座位有限，請(qǐng)事先定位，聯(lián)系電話：7380540

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
have a party舉行聚會(huì)
be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
book…ahead提前預(yù)定…
in time及時(shí)
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
高分句型：
The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．
句中is invited 是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，為了突出主語(yǔ)The Beatles．
It has successfully made several pop songs （①such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ）②which Chinese students are very interested in．
①括號(hào)中列舉，such as 例如…
②定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用，修飾先行詞pop songs．

解答 CONCERT NOTICE
    The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．（時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)）（高分句型）
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the world．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．（樂(lè)隊(duì)介紹）（高分句型）There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．（事先定位）Our telephone is 7380540．（電話）The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，注意海報(bào)的格式．意命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．