Question

16．假如你是Kitty，你想推薦你班同學Simon為本學期最佳學生獎得主，請根據下列要點寫一封80詞左右的推薦信，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入字數：
1．各門功課學得很好．數學、語文、英語很突出．對中國歷史了解很多．
2．喜愛體育，足球踢得很好，是校足球隊的成員．
3．非常樂于助人，經常在車上給老人讓座，為希望工程籌款．
4．有一天在回家路上救了一個落水兒童．
Dear Sir/Madam
I'd like to recommend Simon for this year's Best Student Award．He is good at all the subjects．He has
good grades in Maths，Chinese and English．He is also good at History．He learns a lot about Chinese History．He loves sports and is good atplaying football，he is on our school football team．He's helpful．He often gives his seat to the old on the bus．He also raises money for Project Hope．One day，on his way home，he saved a child from the river．We will be happy if he can have the award．
Yours faithfully
Kitty．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
He often gives his seat to the old on the bus．他經常在車上給老人讓座，give…to把…給…．
 高分句型二
We will be happy if he can have the award．如果他能獲獎，我們會很高興．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
     I'd like to recommend Simon for this year's Best Student Award．He is good at all the subjects．He has good grades in Maths，Chinese and English．He is also good at History．He learns a lot about Chinese History．【要點一，各門功課學得很好．數學、語文、英語很突出．對中國歷史了解很多】He loves sports and  is good at playing football，he is on our school football team．【要點二，喜愛體育，足球踢得很好，是校足球隊的成員】He's helpful．He often gives his seat to the old on the bus【高分句型一，注意固定詞組使用】．He also raises money for Project Hope【要點三，非常樂于助人，經常在車上給老人讓座，為希望工程籌款．】．One day，on his way home，he saved a child from the river．We will be happy if he can have the award【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】．【要點四，有一天在回家路上救了一個落水兒童】
                                                                                                                       Yours faithfully 
                                                                                                                                   Kitty

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．