Question

A. 請以My Last Vacation為題，談?wù)勀闵弦淮蔚穆眯小?/p>

B. 請以 My Best Friend and I 為題，談?wù)勀愕暮糜雅c你之間的相同和不同之處。

請從A、B兩個(gè)題目中任選一個(gè)，60詞以上，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

My Best Friend and I

I have a best friend. Her name is Lucy. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We have some things in common.

　　We both have black eyes and black hair, although my hair is longer than hers. We are both outgoing. We are both funny. And we both like music.

But she is more beautiful than me. I think I’m smarter than her. My favorite subject is science, and her favorite subject is Chinese. However, we both enjoy going shopping.

【解析】

試題分析：在寫作前要選定標(biāo)題，選擇自己熟悉的主題。寫作時(shí)注意句子的完整性和表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。句子之間要流暢，比如適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞加強(qiáng)句子間的邏輯。在細(xì)節(jié)方面，注意單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢，文中使用了很多有用的表達(dá)方式和句式，例如：in some ways 在一些方面；have things in common有相同的事情；enjoy doing sth.喜歡做某事。另外文中用到了一些連詞如but但是；and； however然而，等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。