Question

假如你是李華，3月18日你校舉行了“科技節(jié)”展示活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給你的筆友Mike寫一封郵件，介紹本次活動(dòng)的情況。詞數(shù)：90-100詞。

活動(dòng)目的	提高實(shí)踐技能、培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神
活動(dòng)準(zhǔn)備	學(xué)生們結(jié)成小組、選擇活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目、進(jìn)行實(shí)驗(yàn)研究
展示內(nèi)容	1. 從高處扔雞蛋，雞蛋仍完好無損；2. 紙做的橋上能站人；3. ……
活動(dòng)感受	……

Dear Mike,

In your last e-mail, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you about it.

 

 

 

 

I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mike,

In your last email, you asked me about the Science and Technology Festival in our school. I’m glad to tell you something about it.

It was held on March 18th in order to improve our practical skills and develop our team spirit. Before the festival, the students grouped themselves into teams and each team chose an activity to take part in. They made lots of experiments and studied how to do it well.

The big day came. What the students showed was amazing. For example, eggs were dropped from a high place, but they weren’t broken. The bridge made of paper was so strong that a person could stand on it. Some robots could dance to music.

The festival not only made us more interested in science, but also brought much pleasure to our school life.

I’m looking forward to learning about your school life.

Yours,

Li Hua

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