Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容，你（Millie）用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。

⑴ 請(qǐng)你的朋友Daniel一起參加你們學(xué)校下周五的旅游。

⑵ 計(jì)劃一天的旅游：早上7：00在學(xué)校門(mén)口碰頭，乘兩個(gè)小時(shí)的長(zhǎng)途汽車(chē)，到達(dá)世界公園，那里有來(lái)自全世界的一百多個(gè)名勝古跡 ……

⑶ 中午將乘船游玩，并在船上用餐

⑷ 大約在１７：００回來(lái)，會(huì)很累，但很開(kāi)心

⑸ 你們一定會(huì)為每個(gè)人安排好愉快的一天，如果他來(lái)，請(qǐng)讓你盡快知道，你希望他能來(lái)參加

注意：短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，第2小點(diǎn)用2—3句作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear Daniel,

                                                                                       

                                                                                   

                                                                                  

Best wishes.

Millie

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Daniel,

  We will have our school trip to the World Park next Friday. We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 in the morning. The trip will take us two hours by coach. There are models of over one hundred places of interest from all over the world. We’ll visit the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. You’ll not be able to believe your eyes when you see them. Because the model pyramids look just like the real ones in Egypt. They are small but wonderful. We’ll take a boat trip at noon and have lunch in the boat. We’ll come back at 17:00. We will be very tired but very happy. We’ll make a really fun day for everyone.

  If you want to come, please let me know as soon as possible. I hope you can join us.

  Best wishes,

   Millie

【解析】

 試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)言把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，兼顧第二人稱(chēng)；同時(shí)注意不可逐句翻譯要點(diǎn)，但短文中應(yīng)該包含所有要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中要求習(xí)作者恰當(dāng)使用連詞，和過(guò)渡句，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系；邀請(qǐng)別人參加語(yǔ)氣要委婉誠(chéng)懇。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: places of interest from all over the world來(lái)自全世界的名勝古跡the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. 金字塔，金門(mén)大橋，埃菲爾鐵塔You’ll not be able to believe your eyes 你會(huì)難以相信自己的眼睛等表述準(zhǔn)確，本文中連詞的使用恰當(dāng)，語(yǔ)氣婉轉(zhuǎn)誠(chéng)懇，很有說(shuō)服力。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。