Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)以My neighbour 為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)70左右。

要點(diǎn)：

1.Sandy是我的鄰居，她家住在市中心的一套公寓里，公寓有…室，她最喜歡書房；

2.她是一名學(xué)生，個(gè)高且漂亮，樂(lè)于助人…,經(jīng)常幫助老人，昨天幫我學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；

3.我希望…(自由發(fā)揮1~2句)

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Answer 1

【答案】

My neighbour

Sandy is my neighbour. She lives in an apartment in the center of the city. There are two living rooms, a study and some bedrooms in her apartment. She likes the study best. Sandy is a student. She is tall and beautiful. She likes helping others and she often helps the old. She helped me with my English yesterday. I hope we can be neighbors and friends forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是以“My neighbour”為題的提綱作文，介紹自己的鄰居。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，短文要從“鄰居的家”，“鄰居的人”及“我的希望”幾個(gè)方面展開寫作。短文主要用第三人稱單數(shù)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在寫作中要注意正確地使用詞匯及句型，避免漢式英語(yǔ)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文語(yǔ)言通順、句型結(jié)構(gòu)正確，包含了提示的所有要點(diǎn)。用了live in, in the center of, like best, like doing sth, help sb. with sth等等短語(yǔ)，及there be結(jié)構(gòu)、賓語(yǔ)從句等等復(fù)雜句式。使短文文采飛揚(yáng)，具體生動(dòng)。是一篇較好的習(xí)作。