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根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

畢業(yè)時刻即將到來，你校英文校刊向初三年級學(xué)生征文，題為 “My Best Friend”，以此作為對初中生活的紀(jì)念。請你寫一篇征文，介紹你初中階段的好友。內(nèi)容包括他/她的學(xué)習(xí)情況、性格特點(diǎn)及愛好。(好友的名字用Mary或Jack代替。)

提示詞語：hard-working, be good at, friendly, get on well with, dance, draw, win prizes

My Best Friend

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　My Best Friend

　　Mary is my best friend．She is hard-working and interested in all the subjects we learn at school．She is really good at Chinese and English．Mary is very friendly．She is always ready to help others．So she gets on well with her classmates and friends．What’s more, she is outgoing．She enjoys taking part in all kinds of school activities．She enjoys dancing, and she also draws well．She often joins in competitions and has won many prizes．I feel proud of her as her best friend．

　　After this summer vocation, we may go to different schools for further study, but I’m sure that we’ll be good friends forever．

　　書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　第一檔：(15～13分)

　　完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。

　　第二檔：(12～9分)

　　基本符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)齊全。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順，語意基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。雖然有少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(8～5分)

　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，要點(diǎn)不齊全。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多，語言不通順，表達(dá)不夠清楚，影響整體理解。

　　第四檔：(4～0分)

　　與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多，只是簡單拼湊提示詞語，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。