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假設(shè)你叫李華,你的英國(guó)筆友
Linda為了來(lái)中國(guó)參觀奧運(yùn)會(huì)而報(bào)名參加了漢語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。她最近寫(xiě)信向你詢問(wèn)學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示和你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的體會(huì)給Linda寫(xiě)一封回信。注意:
1.回信需要包括全部要點(diǎn);2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.字?jǐn)?shù)60左右。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.
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Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、評(píng)分原則: 1.本題總分為20分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。 2.評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。 3.詞數(shù)少于40,從總分中減去1分。 4.評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。 5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。 6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn): 1.上課記筆記 2.大膽開(kāi)口 3.多聽(tīng)多讀 4.自擬建議1 5.自擬建議2 三、各檔次給分范圍和要求: 第五檔 (17-20分)完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。 第四檔 (13-16分)完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉 1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。 應(yīng)用了簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。 第三檔 (9-12分)基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解。 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。 整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。 第二檔 (5-8分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 漏掉或未描述一些主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。 較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫。 信息未能清楚傳達(dá)給讀者。 第一檔 (1-4分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。 較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。 缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫。 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 0分未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無(wú)法評(píng)判;寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。 四、說(shuō)明: 1、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。 2、對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。 五、 Possible version:Dear Linda, I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.Firstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I’m sure you will succeed through your hard work. Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China. Yours, Li Hua |
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