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假設(shè)你是導(dǎo)游James，現(xiàn)在有幾名外國(guó)游客要去北京參觀旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下北京的概況。文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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北京位于中國(guó)北部，是中國(guó)的首都城市，也是中國(guó)的政治中心；
美麗而且現(xiàn)代化，但是有太多的汽車(chē)，空氣污染嚴(yán)重；
擁有悠久的歷史，是一座古老的城市；有許多名勝可參觀，如……；故宮曾是皇帝的家；秋天是北京最美的季節(jié)；
可以在“Travel in Beijing”這本書(shū)中了解更多情況。
詞匯：政治中心 the political centre 皇帝 emperor
Hello, everyone! I am your tour guide James. In the following four days, I will show you around Beijing. First let me tell you something about Beijing.
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Now, I will give each of you the tour book.
Hope you will have a nice time here!

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Hello, everyone! I am your tour guide James. In the following four days, I will show you around Beijing. First let me tell you something about this city.
Beijing, our capital city, is in the northern part of China. It's also the political centre in China.
It is beautiful and modern, but there are too many cars and the air pollution is quite serious now. Beijing has a long history and it is an old city. There are lots of places of interest to visit here, such as the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square, the Summer Palace and so on. And the Palace Museum was once the emperors' home. Autumn is the most beautiful season, and the weather is fine and the natural views are so beautiful during summer. If you want to learn more about this city, you can read the book "Travel in Beijing".Now, I will give each of you the tour book.
Hope you will have a nice time here!

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