Question

11．根據下面圖表提示，寫一篇演講稿，號召人們支持"希望工程"．

PROJECT HOPE	機構 宗旨	●建學校 ●資助貧困學生
	資金 來源	●募捐（來自政府或世界各地民間）
	募捐 方式	●做廣告、分發(fā)傳單等號召人們捐贈 ●組織義演等活動募集資金

參考詞匯：1）make donations捐贈  2）give out leaflets分發(fā)傳單  3）charity shows義演
要  求：意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，內容可適當發(fā)揮，詞數80左右．不包含已給出的句子的詞數．
Let's Help Project Hope
Dear friends，
Project Hope is a Chinese charity．It helps build schools and helps poor students in
poor areas．It raises money from the governments or people from all over the world．I think it is
meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．For example，we
can ask people to make donations to it by advertising or giving out leaflets．We can also organize
charity shows or do voluntary work to raise money for Project Hope．
Welcome to join Project Hope．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是寫一篇演講稿，號召人們支持"希望工程"．時態(tài)主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1  機構宗旨建學校；資助貧困學生
2  資金來源：募捐（來自政府或世界各地民間）
3  募捐方式：做廣告、分發(fā)傳單等號召人們捐贈；組織義演等活動募集資金
常用到的重點短語：
all over the world 全世界
for example 例如
ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
give out 捐贈
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②it is meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
2．①For example，we can ②ask people to make donations to it ③by advertising or giving out leaflets．
①for example 例如
②ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
③by+doing  通過某種方法
3．We can also organize charity shows ①or do voluntary work②to raise money for Project Hope．
①or表示或者，表選擇
②to raise money 動詞不定式做目的狀語

解答 Let's Help Project Hope
Dear friends，
      Project Hope is a Chinese charity．It helps build schools and helps poor students in poor areas．（ 機構宗旨建學校；資助貧困學生）It raises money from the governments or people from all over the world．（ 資金來源：募捐）I think it is meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．【高分句型】For example，we can ask people to make donations to it by advertising or giving out leaflets．【高分句型】We can also organize charity shows or do voluntary work to raise money for Project Hope．【高分句型】（募捐方式）
      Welcome to join Project Hope．

點評 一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文在內容和語言兩方面應是一個統一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質量．然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經常出現名詞不變復數、第三人稱單數不加s，前后不一致，以及時態(tài)語態(tài)、句子完整性等方面的錯誤．所以考生應該從平時練習出發(fā)，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)．