Question

15．假設(shè)你是李華，向筆友Tom寫一封信要點提示如下：
1．兩年前你來到新的班級，沒有朋友，感到孤獨…
2．兩年中Tom多次給你寫信，他在信中鼓勵你多交朋友；告訴你學好英語的方法；和你分享快樂；你變得…
3．告訴他你會努力學習，上一所好的高中，上大學，將來當一名醫(yī)生．
4．近年來你的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大的變化，你邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)玩．
參考詞匯：分享快樂share happiness  高中 senior high school 家鄉(xiāng)hometown
注意：
1．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已替你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．詞數(shù)80左右．
3．要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮．
Dear Tom，
How time flies!We have been friends for two years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!
Two years ago，                                               
Hope to see you soon!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：These two years，you wrote me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．這兩年，你給我寫了很多信，總是鼓勵我盡可能多交朋友．encourage sb  to do sth鼓勵某人做某事，as many as possible盡可能多的
高分句型二：Besides，you were always sharing happiness with me，which made my life more colorful．此外，你總是與我分享快樂，這使我的生活更加豐富多彩．besides此外，還有，表意思的遞進；share sth with sb與某人分享某物；which 引導非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．

解答 Dear Tom，
How time flies!We have been friends for two years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!
Two years ago，you came to the new class，no friends，feel lonely．（兩年前你來到新的班級，沒有朋友，感到孤獨）These two years，you wrote me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．（高分句型一）When I had trouble with my English，you told me many good ways to improve it．Besides，you were always sharing happiness with me，which made my life more colorful．（高分句型二）Thanks to your help，I have become more confident and positive．I really appreciate your help．（兩年中Tom對我的幫助）
I will work hard in order to enter a good senior high school．I want to be a doctor after graduating from a university in the future．（告訴Tom在學習方面的情況及自己的理想）
These years，great changes have taken place in my hometown and I hope you can come to my hometown to experience the new changes．（近年來家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大的變化，邀請他來家鄉(xiāng)玩．）Hope to see you soon!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．