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3．隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物（Online Shoppmg）已經(jīng)變得越來(lái)越受歡迎．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊．

一些人喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)	一些人喜歡去商店購(gòu)物
優(yōu)勢(shì)（advantages）	劣勢(shì)（disadvantages）
可以隨時(shí)購(gòu)物	只看見(jiàn)圖片，看不到實(shí)物
足不出戶，節(jié)省時(shí)間	衣服不能試穿
商品便宜，可以省錢	不夠安全

參考詞匯：without going out，save time，compare，try on．damage
要求：（1）詞數(shù)80～100個(gè)
（2）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Online shopping
With the development of the Internet，online shopping is becoming more and more popular these years．
We can buy almost everything on the Internet and receive it in a few days by post．
There are many advantages of online shopping．First of all，we could do shopping at any time．The shops are always open．Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．Finally，we can save money．The prices online are usually much lower．
However，some people like to shop with their friends．They think they can only see pictures instead of real products．【高分句型】They can't try the clothes on，either．Also it is not safe to shop online
However，online shopping is changing our way of life．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是描述網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1優(yōu)勢(shì)（1）可以隨時(shí)購(gòu)物；（2）足不出戶，節(jié)省時(shí)間；（3）商品便宜，可以省錢
2劣勢(shì)：（1）只看見(jiàn)圖片，看不到實(shí)物；（2）衣服不能試穿；（3）不夠安全
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
first of all 首先
go out 出門
instead of 而不是
try on 試穿
【高分句型】
1．Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．
without介詞表示沒(méi)有…，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞
2．They think①they can only see pictures②instead of real products．
①think 后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句
②instead of 而不是，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
3．Also it is not safe to shop online．
it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 With the development of the Internet，online shopping is becoming more and more popular these years．We can buy almost everything on the Internet and receive it in a few days by post．
    There are many advantages of online shopping．First of all，we could do shopping at any time．The shops are always open．（可以隨時(shí)購(gòu)物）Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．（足不出戶，節(jié)省時(shí)間）【高分句型】Finally，we can save money．The prices online are usually much lower．（商品便宜，可以省錢）
    However，some people like to shop with their friends．They think they can only see pictures instead of real products．（只看見(jiàn)圖片，看不到實(shí)物）【高分句型】They can't try the clothes on，either．（衣服不能試穿）Also it is not safe to shop online．【高分句型】（不夠安全）
    However，online shopping is changing our way of life．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)同一件事情，人們往往有不同的看法，即正反兩種觀點(diǎn)．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫(xiě)作格式一般是：提出問(wèn)題→兩種不同觀點(diǎn)→對(duì)兩種不同觀點(diǎn)的論據(jù)（理由）逐項(xiàng)作對(duì)比．如果要求說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，可在結(jié)尾段加上自己的觀點(diǎn)并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由，最好不要重復(fù)前面的理由．
考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)．考生注意使用過(guò)渡詞或者過(guò)渡句來(lái)使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢．