Question

假如你們學(xué)校“英語愛好者俱樂部”將對“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論, 請根據(jù)下列提示, 用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點應(yīng)包括：

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個人看法
不吃早餐 愛吃零食 偏食 飲食過量 對我們的健康有害	飲食多樣化 飲食定時定量有規(guī)律 多吃水果、蔬菜 對我們的健康有益 讓我們避免各種疾病	重要性：有益身體健康……

注意：1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 發(fā)言稿結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)：120左右。

3. 參考詞匯：偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack(s)

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. ___________________________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals at a regular time and proper amount. If we get into good habits of eating meals, it will benefit us a lot. In addition, good eating habits can protect us from all kinds of illnesses.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. After all, health is the most important in our life. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇關(guān)于良好飲食習(xí)慣的發(fā)言稿。寫作要點包括：部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣；良好的飲食習(xí)慣；個人的看法等三個方面；詞數(shù)在120詞左右，注意開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)；注意使用參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文涵蓋了所有的要點，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了定語從句、條件句、倒裝等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：定語從句which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food；條件句If we get into good habits of eating meals；倒裝句Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.等，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用However, still, Besides, In addition, In my opinion等來銜接句子和段落，使語意變得連貫，銜接變得緊湊；范文注意使用some...some...some others...and still some表示列舉，使表達(dá)更有層次感，條理更加清晰；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了too much, do harm to, keep fit, protect...from, try to do, build up, after all等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實。

考點：書信類作文